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       You squirmed around inside the small bag you'd been placed in. You had just been kidnapped and had no idea who did it. You see, you were the 5 year old daughter of Germany. Your dad was always worried about you getting kidnapped. Lately Daddy and the other Axis had been saying something about Allies and 2P's causing problems. You had no idea what that meant and didn't really care... That was up till now! You squirmed and whimpered as they ran and got in a car. You heard a door slam and felt yourself being tossed onto one of the seats. "Go!" One of the men shouted. You felt the car speed forward as you flew back against the seat. You cried out, hitting your head and blacking out.



                               *LE TIME SKIP*



            You woke up the next morning with your head hurting. You looked around to find you were in a prison cell. It was a small cell with a white medical cot. You shivered at how cold the cell was, the thin sheet and blanket of the cot providing very little protection and warmth. You hopped off the cot and walked towards the cell door. Only to be stopped by a chain that was attached to your wrist.  You tugged at the chain and tried to get loose, but failed! Soon you saw Britain! He came towards you with what looked like a plate of burnt scones and eggs. You backed away from him hitting your back against the wall. You cried out for help. Not only was his food burnt but it could be poisoned! You struggled to get away as Britain tried to feed you the burnt food. After about 10 minutes of this France came in and pushed him aside. France took a packaged breakfast pastry out of his pocket and handed it to you. You devoured the sweet pastry like then end was near.



           France gave you a juice box and a blanket before leaving your cell. "See Britain, you need to be nicer to 'er. (Name)'s stomach would be killing her if you had fed her that crap!" France whined staring the Brit.



         "It's not fault! She's just a picky eater, that's all!" Britain snapped back feeling offended. After a bit of bickering and arguing they left. You sat there alone in your dark cell, drinking a juice box. You wrapped yourself in the warm blanket soon dosing off...



                                    *MEAN WHILE*


       The Allies sat around talking about (Name). They had just kidnapped her and had just sent a letter to Germany demanding money. The hard part was going to be taking care of her. She may have been 5, but she was smart. Just as the Allies were about to check on her, the alarm went off. Someone had invaded and was breaking into the Allies head quarters. The Allies ran down the halls unarmed, expecting it to be the Axis. Boy were they wrong! What they saw surprised them more then anything! It was the 2P!Allies! "Hey, Nice to see ya fatass!" Alfred's 2P laughed, before swinging his bat with nails through it at them.



        "Bloody Hell! It's the 2P's!" Britain cursed as his 2P came at him with a large knife.



        "You should really watch your language Artie!" 2P!Britain grinned trying to slice the 1P's throat.



         The Allies began to fight their 2P!Selves getting their asses kicked really badly. While they fought 2P!Canada went off to find (Name). He walked calmly with his large polar bear searching the place. Soon they found a 1P!(Name) wrapped in a blanket. 2P!Canada took his hockey stick and broke the lock on the cell, waking up poor (Name). (Name) gasped in surprise and started trembling. Mr.Kumajiro growled and walked towards (Name) sniffing her. 2P! Matthew just sighed and grabbed (Name), breaking the chain that held her against the wall. Once again (Name) was shoved in a bag, made of dark black cloth. (Name) squirmed and cried, she was not liking this one bit.



                                 *YOUR P.O.V.*


        A strange man who looked like Canada grabbed you out of your cell. He shoved you in a bag and was now taking you to god-knows-where. You kept struggle and whining even though you knew you weren't going to escape. You listen as you heard shouting and yelling. You felt yourself being tossed around in the bag and handed to another person. "We got the girl now let's go, aru!" You heard someone say. You squirmed till you got your head out of the bag, only to be forced back inside. Before being forced back inside you caught a glimpse of the Allies beaten and bloodied. You knew that if your dad was saving you he wouldn't have been so rough. Who the hell had kidnapped you... again. Many questions ran through your mind before you heard another car door opening.



        You were tossed into what appeared to be, You guessed it! A van! A white van! Soon enough the door closed and your captures sped off. You managed to get your head out of the bag once more only this time to be pinned down by a man in bright pink. Next to him a man looking like France blew a puff of cigarette smoke, causing you to cough. Then, a man with red eyes and a pony tail took out a rag and a brown bottle. He poured some of the liquid onto the rag and handed it to the guy wearing pink. The man forced the rag over your month before whispering, "Enjoy your nap, Poppet..." Then you blacked out. Wondering where the heck you were going...



                              

                                  *TO BE CONTINUED*





WARNING DARK, EVIL 2P!ALLIES! Don't like don't read! Kidnapping takes place! Next chapter is gonna be bloody! Enjoy! LOL KIDNAP FAIL!
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:iconbunnyfunnygirl:
bunnyfunnygirl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Student Artist
"Wondering where you're going..."

I'm going ON A MAGIC CARPET RIDE TO A WHOLE NEW WORLD!!!
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LMAO
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bunnyfunnygirl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Student Artist
;3
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KariSparda Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No new chapta??? ~Aru???
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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KariSparda Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks u!!! ^3^
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Np dear. 
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TheKnightsWing Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
I would have been screaming, "WHY CAN'T YOU CARRY ME INSTEAD OUT THROWING ME IN A SACK! IT'S THE SAME THING!"
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL IKR!
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Skatipirate Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
Awwwww poor chibi me, id bite his hand off~!!!!
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't blame you. LOL
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Skatipirate Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
i really enjoyed it though...i hate my 2p~!
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep~
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Skatipirate Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
hahaha how do you describe your 2p~?
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 Mine? Well, she is the opposite of me. She's rude and a health nut. She is crazy and violent had blonde hair and pink eyes. Also loves the color pink and kills things for fun. She also has mental problems.
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Skatipirate Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
....Jeez, my 2p kills people with a knife or posion.
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mine tortures her vitcums...
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ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HOW DARE THEY TREAT A CHILD LIK ZHAT?!?!HMPH!England (Shocked) [V5] 
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Kumicho hello 
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Creepypastawolfgirl Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Filmographer
Um........ I-is t-there a p-part two
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course. There's 12 parts. :) Here's all the chapters in this folder: flyingpastakitty.deviantart.co…
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Creepypastawolfgirl Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Filmographer
T-thx :)
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Np dear.
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Creepypastawolfgirl Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Filmographer
:)
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TicciTobyArt Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Artist
"He came toward you with what looked like a plate of burnt scones and eggs."
PURE TORTURE!
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL Yes!
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TicciTobyArt Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Artist
Poor England, he needs to visit Kiku to learn how to make some sushi.
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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DokiDokiHatsuneMiku Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Fudge let me at them after all I can kick there but since I'm a yandere
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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DokiDokiHatsuneMiku Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
What they deserve a lesson I just need Oliver's knife then everything will be fineShintarou Kisaragi (Grin) [V5] 
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
O.o Oh my...
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DokiDokiHatsuneMiku Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
What?😀
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL Violent! XD
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DokiDokiHatsuneMiku Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Yay lol
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student Writer
One word to describe this. Crap. Actually, make that all the cuss words.
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Also, might I add I don't care what you have to say. I had fun writing this and many people enjoyed it. Plus, It has 9,471 views,  336 favourites, 192 comments (Most being positive.) , and 19 downloads.  This is one of my older writings. My other series: flyingpastakitty.deviantart.co… was a much better story and way more successful. Plus, I'm guessing from your rude comment,  you may be jealous or wanting attention. Now, would you be as so kind as to leave my page. Have a nice day. :D
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
-__- Whatever. If you don't like my writing leave my page.
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
No, I like your writing and I enjoy it. It's just you don't get kidnapped by the 2ps everyday. That's what I was talking about. *facepalms* I didn't mean the story was crap and stuff like that.
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You could've explained that. Plus, this is a twisted story. Also, it's my story. I choose who the kidnapper(s) are and who is kidnapped. Anyway thank you.
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah, sry about all the confusion.
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's cool. Plus, understand this is an older story.
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
Okay
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
Okay.
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Lizardhero123 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Cricket: XD I can't help laughing at white vans because my brother-in-law has one that he uses for work (he sells pools). To joke with him we call it the stalker van.
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FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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Love-bug-2 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
I…got…kidnapped…TWICE!!
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:iconflyingpastakitty:
FlyingPastaKitty Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! Yes you did!
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icespark1298 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
Is there a part two? I can't find it...
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